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Beneath the Starry Sky by ~alteredboi:iconalteredboi:



Beneath the starry sky,
Beneath the twinkling eyes of night;
He cast a star upon the ground;
He cast his eyes upon the light.

The light bared sparkling tears;
The light exposed his tragic haste
To stop the sparked catastrophe,
To stop the tragedy he faced.

He faced the cornerstone;
He faced the wrathful gods to dare.
He called the corners of the round;
He called the gods to hear his prayer.

His prayer beseeched their grace;
His prayer among the stars did drown,
For the graceless gods cared little
For the star that he'd cast down.
©2006-2009 ~alteredboi
:iconalteredboi:

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Written in 2005.

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:iconbmunage:
Thats really cool.
I really like the third stanza.
Not sure on the final one but it does wrap it up well.

Brilliant rhythm :clap:

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Art is where the freedom of speach is actually free - BMunage
:iconbrat07:
the 2nd line is my fav - never really tawt of night in such a way

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have you been smoking the goofy fruit from the yaya bush?

333, I'm only half evil :evillaugh:

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