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Here in the darkness
Fear falls farther from my sight.
Still moments harbor grey thoughts,
Casting rare light upon the blades.
My lover turns his eyes away,
Abandoning this faithless guide
To seek keener lines where dreams discharge.
Tonight stars crash beyond the clouds,
Forging fire from the rain
That would keep us safe from harm.
What dream lies beneath troubled heart,
Seeking without question fortune's hand?
Leave seeking to greed, love,
My fortune is you.
©2006-2009 ~alteredboi
:iconalteredboi:

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Written sometime between 2000-2002. I suppose this might be more appropriate for the Romantic category, but I have come to truly despise the word "romantic."

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i like this, some real nice creative imagery and metaphors

these could definently be lyrics to a power metal song

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I like my coffee :coffeecup: black just like my metal :headbang:

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